What I Did During the Last School Holiday
During
the last school holiday, many family have their activity that they doing to
make their holiday meaningful. My family and I also have activities that we
doing
during holiday. My family and I went to Port Dickson at Negeri Sembilan.
We
went to Port Dickson at 8 o’clock. We took a few hours to arrive there. Once we
arrive there, my dad goes to reception to check-in a chalet. We arrived at 10 o’clock.
After my dad got a key room, we go in to chalet to get some rest.
At afternoon, we
went to a nearby restaurant to get some lunch. After that, my sibling and I go
to the beach for bathing. My parents are sitting under a coconut tree near the
beach to see us. At 4 o’clock, my sibling and I go to the chalet to eat.
At night, we
were sightseeing on the beach. We also could to capture the moon that night because
it’s looks beautiful. The wind blew very strong and makes us felt very cold. After
that, we go to the chalet to sleep.
That’s
all activities that my family and I doing during holiday.
Hai again. First of all, refers to your 1st paragraph.
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