The Person That I
Admired
The person that I admired the most is
my mother. I admired her because she always there when I’m in trouble. She will
give my sibling and me an advice to settle our problem calmly. She also always
helps us in studies. We really love her.
My mother’s name is Jabariah Binti
Bachik. I called her Mom’s. She is caring, patient and responsible mother. She
always asked us whether we have a problem. She is also a kind person because
she likes to help a poor people by donating. She is one who never gave up while
she faced problem.
I hope that she will always be in
good health and protected by God. I also hope that I will be like her. That’s
all that can I tell to you all. I wish that her life will be always blessed by
God.
Hai ajiem, here are my comments on the 2nd paragraph of your writing.
ReplyDelete"...I called her mom's." No needs to put "'s" at the end of mom. "Mom" is just enough.