Friday, 5 October 2012

If Only I LIsten..


If only I Listen…

If only I listen my father advices “don’t talk to stranger”. Sad to say, I never took his advice seriously.
                One day, I’m walking back home alone because of missed the public bus. I came late to bus stop because I haven’t done my essay homework. Puan Saibah, my English teacher asked me to finished my homework on that time. After I have done my homework, I immediately ran to get my bus but it was too late. I’m so tired. I went to the grocery store to buy some water because I was very thirsty.
                Suddenly, while I was drinking, there is a stranger came to me. He was man that wore a red suit. He came and tapping my shoulder. He was asking me, “Where are you going? You want me to take you home?” I replied without ignored my father advice, “I want back home. Okay, I follow you.”
                When I got into his car, I felt very dizzy then I fainted. When I woke up, I was in a dark place. I felt very afraid. My mouth closed with tape and my hands were tied with rope. I immediately tried to escape. Five minutes ago, I was able to escape. I walked slowly to go away from there. Incidentally, the place was close to my uncle’s house. I ran and ran faster to go my uncle’s house.
                I felt very sorry to my father because never took his advice. From today’s, I promised myself to not talk to stranger. 

1 comment:

  1. Salam...
    Here are my comments. First of all, refers to the 2nd paragraph of your essay.
    1)On day, I'm walking...[wrong]
    On day, I was walking...[correct]
    2)After the words of "to and not" you should continue with root word.

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