If only I Listen…
If only I listen my father advices “don’t talk to stranger”.
Sad to say, I never took his advice seriously.
One
day, I’m walking back home alone because of missed the public bus. I came late
to bus stop because I haven’t done my essay homework. Puan Saibah, my English teacher
asked me to finished my homework on that time. After I have done my homework, I
immediately ran to get my bus but it was too late. I’m so tired. I went to the
grocery store to buy some water because I was very thirsty.
Suddenly,
while I was drinking, there is a stranger came to me. He was man that wore a red
suit. He came and tapping my shoulder. He was asking me, “Where are you going? You
want me to take you home?” I replied without ignored my father advice, “I want
back home. Okay, I follow you.”
When I got
into his car, I felt very dizzy then I fainted. When I woke up, I was in a dark
place. I felt very afraid. My mouth closed with tape and my hands were tied
with rope. I immediately tried to escape. Five minutes ago, I was able to
escape. I walked slowly to go away from there. Incidentally, the place was
close to my uncle’s house. I ran and ran faster to go my uncle’s house.
I felt
very sorry to my father because never took his advice. From today’s, I promised
myself to not talk to stranger.
Salam...
ReplyDeleteHere are my comments. First of all, refers to the 2nd paragraph of your essay.
1)On day, I'm walking...[wrong]
On day, I was walking...[correct]
2)After the words of "to and not" you should continue with root word.