I still remember the most embarrassing day of my life. On that time, I still at primary school and was eight years old. That incident happen in my classroom and at home. I'm felt very embarrassing at that time.
This story begin when I wake up in the morning. I went to the bathroom to wash up my body and brush my teeth. After that, I go to the downstairs for having my breakfast. Suddenly, my sister laughed and I asked her why she laugh. She said there was something on your nose. I felt very embarrass.
After having my breakfast, I went to school by walking. The distance school from my house is 500 meter.
I reach the school at seven o'clock. During the assembly, I slip because stepping banana skin on road. All students were laugh including the teachers. I'm ashamed at the time.
That's all my embarrassing story.
Hahah.. Stepping On A Banana Skin ? R U Watching Tom and Jerry ?
ReplyDeleteOkay, let's us straight to the points. First of all, refers 1st paragraph of your essay. Looks at the 2nd sentence, where you suppose to use "On that day,..." since you are referring to the embarrassing 'day' of your life instead of "On that time,...". Next,the last sentence of the same paragraph,where you wrote "I'm felt very embarrassing...". It should be just "I felt very embarrassing...". Why? Because you're writing about something that already past. I'm = I am = present.
ReplyDeleteThat's all for now.