My Family <3
All people have their family
members. Family members consists father, mother and son or daughter. I have
nine family members which are my dad, my mum, three brothers, two sisters and
one young sister. I love my family so much because they are caring towards me
and sibling.
My father’s name is Shahrin Bin Jemali.
He works as administrative assistant in Jabatan Pengangkutan
Jalan in Wangsa Maju at Setapak. He is responsible, caring and kind father. He
loves history book, history channel in Astro and everything about history. His
hobby is read newspaper and book. My sibling and I called him Abah.
My mother’s name is Jabariah Binti
Bachik. She works as same with my father work but different places. She works
in Pusat Kegiatan Guru Kuang at Sekolah Kebangsaan Sg.Plong. She is also
responsible, caring and kind mother like my father. Her hobby is read novel and
cooking. She like watching a adventures and Hindustan story.
My siblings always help each other when someone of us face problem. We also will share any problem for us to settle together. Only four from nine of my sibling still study and some of them have their own job. Only this I can share with you all.
Hai, it's me again. Like always, here are my comments. Firstly, look at your 1st paragraph. Where you only write "...me and sibling.". If I'm not mistake on the same paragraph you had mentioned indirectly that you have 7 siblings, right? Thus, you should write "...me and siblings." That's all.
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